http://kag523.livejournal.com/ ([identity profile] kag523.livejournal.com) wrote in [personal profile] embolalia 2012-01-30 04:20 am (UTC)

More angst... *sigh* I think, if I'm honest, I wanted a little more regret in Kara's reaction to Lee - (I believed her grief for Sam... I was left a little cool with her reaction to Lee) - but I completely trust you in the telling of your story, and I think it would be canon-consistent for Kara in love with Leoben to behave this way. I did, however, love Lee's reaction. That felt tremendously consistent with the end of canon for the two of them. That last moment of goodbye and moving on. Beautifully and artfully done.

I'm looking forward to seeing the next phase of this story play out. It feels like one 'part' has completed and the next is about to begin. I have some ideas of where this is going and look forward to seeing what I have picked up on and what I'm completely out to lunch on. Hee hee!

Thank you for this story! K :)

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