http://kag523.livejournal.com/ ([identity profile] kag523.livejournal.com) wrote in [personal profile] embolalia 2011-08-18 07:01 am (UTC)

What a lovely piece! I am smitten with the way you've broken the entire fic into vignettes. Every section feels complete unto itself and yet they build this beautiful whole. I love the notion of Leoben seeing bits and pieces of a great whole, and being unable to see the entire thing until the end. What a wonderful piece of storytelling. Thank you for sharing. *hugs* K :>)

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